Becoming a successful person is like courting the woman you love. It needs ample of time to earn points and to prove you really deserve having it. Just like pursuing a woman, you have to prove her, she's worth your time. If you want to be successful, you have to be more responsible giving more effort just to grab it. You have to be hardworking, enthusiastic and loyal for everything you've done. I'm not saying, you have to be a perfect person. Giving your best is purely enough for every success is a comfort just like woman, she wants to feel comfortable having you.
Sense of humor is also an important factor to become a successful one, you have to balance your life, your feelings and your attitude for life is a complicated one. As what courting acts like, you have to tickle the woman you love for she doesn't want to be bored. Sense of humor in a way that you don't look or feel like a clown, just being yourself is the best way either. To become a successful person, you need to have trust and faith in God for He drives everything like wooing a woman, trust and faith is a basic factor. It's not necessary to treat her as your God, because she might get spoiled.
Becoming a successful person and courting a woman comes up with great similarities. But whatever it is, contentment is the best way of life. Success of a lifetime is in relation with love of a lifetime and it is the same success as it was.
Comments:
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2. The last paragraph could have been improved to conclude the analogy.
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